Headmistress’ Commendation for English

Kareem from Year 2 visited Mrs Ebery in her study and brought with him the work he had been doing in English on The Twits. He produced a very good comic strip showing his favourite piece from the story, where Mr Twit ties Mrs Twit to a metal hoop in the ground and fastens balloons to her so that she will stretch.

Kareem used a fantastic simile to describe this, “flying off into the air like a shooting star”. He also made good use of connectives and speech bubbles in his work.

He received five House points for his very creative work.

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